anc 12/1
this week i was a passage master. being a passage master i get to pick out paragraphs that i think are important or should be shared with my group and, or to be read again. So far into the book i have read that in the beginning of the book she tells you about each of the charicters in Mary Lou`s famiy. then when the beginning of summer comes around her brother Dennis had gotten a metal spring into his knee from the bed he and his sister were bringing a bed down stairs from the Attic. So Mary Lou called a neighbor from across the street. the woman told her to wrap up his knee while she went home to get dressed. that way when she got back she could take Dennis to the emergency room. while they are at the hospital Mary Lou stays home with her little sister to make sure nothing happened to her. when Dennis came home his mom was now with him. the next day Mary Lou is walking with a friend and runs into a boy she likes. (Alex Cheevey). but when she runs into him she notices that he he is being shy and is blushing because i says he is going to a friends house when she could tell that he didnt know where he was going.
December 4th, 2006 at 10:22 am
Erica I agree with you about the spring in the knee part. It sounds important. The only part in the paragraph I didnt understand is when you said “but when she runs into him he he is being shy and is blushing becouse i says he is going to a freinds house.” you shold watch your spelling but other than that I think the paragraph is great.